Rough Cut feedback

During the process of creating our rough cut, towards reaching the end of the rough cut we had shown our music video to our class to gather some feedback on WWW (What Went Well) and EBI (Even Better If). We have used this information to further improve our music video considering all of the points from each and everyone.

One of the points made which went well that had cropped up numerous times is there was a variety of shots. This is good feedback as it is something we were aiming for the audience to see, as we had filmed in a variety of different locations and also had used different shots. However, something that we could improve on is to ensure the lip synching is in time.

Another point which was good for us was we had excellent mise-en-scene. This is something we were glad to see as we had done research into what costumes, hair, make-up we were going to use, and although some of the make-up was not used as we ended up changing the storyboard, it showed the mise-en-scene still proved to be good. The use of lighting in the chorus as one of our locations is also something we were hoping for the audience to notice with the use of different colours on the stage. However, another point which we could improve on is to ad more green screen footage. At the time of showing the rough cut we had stop-motion images of both myself (Ben) and Darwin, however we have since then added more and are continuing to do so, with the use of various images using the green screen.